(Reincarnation by Ethenae @ deviantart.com)
~ Predetermined Fate ~
What begins this course -
our life, the paths we choose,
are the choices ours?
Or are they specific to a predetermined future
laid out by the hands of Fate
and we just step into them nicely
because it's what we were born to do?
Look around - where do you belong?
We don't know the birthdate of our souls
we live in borrowed bodies
only knowing this time we were born into
but nothing of where we've been before, or when,
or where our souls will travel to after our bodies are gone.
You seem familiar, but we haven't met before.
A land I've never seen speaks to me.
A place I've lived forever, does not resonate within me.
My mind does not know why these things are so
but perhaps my soul does.
We strive to find purpose in life
but what if, as we seek to find a purpose in this life
it is the next one that is destined to have the greatest impact?
Perhaps when our time is up here,
(whether we've lived a long life or a child barely three)
we were just making a pit stop
waiting as the stars align for our next phase
and we go again - same soul, different body
we remember nothing
feeling only the occasional vague sense of déjà vu
maybe there's a reason for that.
(c) Dahlia Ramone: February 25, 2018
This was written for Blogophilia
"Bye" Week topic (choose your own): Write about reincarnation
Bonus Prompts (choose your own):
Hard (2 pts): Use a song lyric by Dream Theater
("Look around, where do you belong" from The Answer Lies Within)
(First line in second stanza)
(First line in second stanza)
Easy (1 pt): Mention the word "Fate"
Firsties!
ReplyDeleteLots to ponder with this write, Dollface!
ReplyDeleteIrene
Love the depths you went to with this one...many relatable questions and insights here. Loved it <3
ReplyDeleteI don't like to believe in fate or maybe I'd rather believe I have lots of choices. But the arguments for it not being so are strong.
ReplyDeleteStunningly beautiful.... this truly resonates and gets my thoughts flowing, my friend. I believe we are all on a journey and our paths do cross for a reason. We may never understand the reasons why. I guess this gives hope for our "second phase" in life! xoxo Love ya sister girlfriend!
ReplyDeleteFree choice is gives us a reason to try again, fate might not. 8 points Earthling
ReplyDeleteMartien
seems you were in a philosophical state of mind, which is sometimes better than a New York state of mind! I enjoyed your pontification of the soul. Jay Soul, hehe.
ReplyDeleteGood write
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the eloquent and powerful food for thought.
ReplyDeleteyour words hit a cord in me. Thanks for expressing them.
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